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...we were moving very fast when…
It was a small and old car but my friend was standing beside it happily
grinning so I smiled encouragingly back. “Come on get in and we’ll take
it for a spin” Sam urged. “But you aren’t even allowed to take passengers
yet!” I said, he just laughed “Come on don't be silly” He was looking so
excited so I reluctantly climbed into the car. We sped down the road
heading towards the intersection. That was when Sam put his foot on
the accelerator. I screamed at him, but it was to late. We were moving
very fast when the truck hit us. We landed with a bone shattering crunch,
everything went black...
grinning so I smiled encouragingly back. “Come on get in and we’ll take
it for a spin” Sam urged. “But you aren’t even allowed to take passengers
yet!” I said, he just laughed “Come on don't be silly” He was looking so
excited so I reluctantly climbed into the car. We sped down the road
heading towards the intersection. That was when Sam put his foot on
the accelerator. I screamed at him, but it was to late. We were moving
very fast when the truck hit us. We landed with a bone shattering crunch,
everything went black...
Incorporating speech into your text helps to create detail for your reader. Your nouns verbs and adjectives are specific which adds interest to your writing. I look forward to reading your next post.
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